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1- The Creation of the Universe and the Birth of the Alicorn Gods


In the beginning, there was nothing but empty darkness. There was no time, no sun or moon, and no ponies. But one day, if you could call it a day, there was a tremendous explosion of light brighter then anything that had ever been or ever will be and out of the Light came two alicorns. The first was named Uronus and the second was named Geia. Both alicorns looked around at the space the Light had made and both set forth to explore this universe. Uronus created the abstract side of the universe, taming the storms of magic that were leftover from the Great explosion of Light and distributing it evenly across the universe. Geia created the physical side of the universe, making meteors that turned into planets and making the stars and moons. The alicorns looked at their work and were pleased and both alicorns knew each other and by doing so begated more alicorns to wonder the universe. These alicorns were born with unique abilities such as Cronus's ability to master time and Hermercury's gift for speed. But when the two parent alicorns looked upon their children, they had realize that they were missing three more. One alicorn to control the rising and setting of the sun, one alicorn to control the rising and setting of the moon, and one alicorn to control the uncontrollable forces of chaos. And so it came to pass that both alicorns knew each other once more and two alicorns emerged out of Geia's womb. The first alicorn that emerge was a white alicorn with a pink mane and a cutie mark of a sun on her flank. This one was named Celestia. The second alicorn that emerge was a blue unicorn with a mane of stars and a cutie mark of a crescent moon on her flank. This one was named Luna. But when the third alicorn was to be made, Geia wanted the god of chaos to have a special uniqueness that would make him stand out from the others. So for the third alicorn, Geia bestowed upon him the right arm of a lion, the left claw of an eagle, the right leg of a lizard, and the left leg of a goat. In addition, he was given a bat's right wing, a Pegasus' left wing, and a snake's tail, along with two horns upon his equine head. This one was named Discord. Then the parent alicorns constructed an immense palace of gold and silver for their children to live in and they named it Olympia. The two parents then took leave of their children in order to maintain the balance of the universe and by doing so left them to their own devices..




This is the first chapter of what I consider to be a fan-fic of epic proportions. As you can tell, it is written in a very old style of speaking similar to the Bible and like the Bible from my perspective, it is a series of events that did happen, but not in the way it is written in this text. I really hope you guys like this story and hope for it's continuation.
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Ponykiller1225 Featured By Owner Jun 1, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
0_0 what in the world sir i did not believe that such a thing existed but yet we have fallen from sanity and risen to a f***ing religion. WE ARE ALL GOING TO HELL CUZ OF THIS!!!!
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DisneyMaster Featured By Owner Jun 1, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
It's just a fan-fic dude.
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:iconihadnothingbetter2do:
What in the name of the motherland is this?

And all those hidden comments, can't take criticism I see hmm?
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DisneyMaster Featured By Owner Jun 16, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Not when it turns into pure meanness.
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:iconihadnothingbetter2do:
I don't beleive that meanness is a word comrade, learn2grammers.

And this is exactly the type of criticism one should expect if they are to produce fiction of this type, it is usually hard to find work that has not been put down due to the fact that it's contents are stupid to the reader, even harder if it references religion.
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Anunymau5 Featured By Owner May 20, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
OOOOOOOH! THE CRINGE!
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DisneyMaster Featured By Owner May 20, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
What's wrong this time?
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Anunymau5 Featured By Owner May 25, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
The cringe.... It burns.
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DisneyMaster Featured By Owner May 25, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
What cringe?
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Anunymau5 Featured By Owner May 26, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Ugh... Didn't think I would need to spell it out for you but seeing as you're a misogynistic asswad I might as well. This. Story. Makes. Me. Cringe. It transcends fanfiction and just becomes a living tangent. A metaphysical manifestation of your mind. Something no one want's to read or even listen to.
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DisneyMaster Featured By Owner May 26, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
How do you know people don't want to read what's on my mind?
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Anunymau5 Featured By Owner May 28, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Because most people don't like neurotic misogynistic sociopaths?
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DisneyMaster Featured By Owner May 28, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I am not misogynistic, I vote Democrat for Gods sakes!
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TheManicalManiak Featured By Owner May 26, 2014
because what is on your mind is shit.
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DisneyMaster Featured By Owner Jul 19, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Well they are being ruled by god-like alicorns, so they might as well have something of a religion.
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DisneyMaster Featured By Owner Jul 19, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Well two of them control the sun & moon.
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DaGhost520 Featured By Owner Jul 10, 2013
Why?
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DisneyMaster Featured By Owner Jul 10, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Why not?
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MyLittlePrimo Featured By Owner Jul 8, 2013
:iconmegustaplz:Uronus and Geia, huh?!
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DisneyMaster Featured By Owner Jul 8, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
If you are wondering why I changed the spelling of their names, it was a combination of wanting to avoid the Uranus joke and I thought that's how you spelled Gaia.
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MyLittlePrimo Featured By Owner Jul 8, 2013
:XD:Actually, the Megusta meme usually means you like something, and this was one of those cases.
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DisneyMaster Featured By Owner Jul 8, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I see. Very well then.
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Wesdaaman Featured By Owner Jun 17, 2013  Student General Artist
I have a very similar story, Orign of the Pony Universe.

Check it out :)

Right here: [link]
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DisneyMaster Featured By Owner Jun 17, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
It might take me a while to read it, but I'll call you when I'm done.
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Wesdaaman Featured By Owner Jun 17, 2013  Student General Artist
ok
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Bronyman1995 Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Ummm....I don't know how to react to this...I'm christian...this is awkward to say the least...
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DisneyMaster Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Maybe you can sleep on it and finalize your decision in the morning?
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Bronyman1995 Featured By Owner Jul 15, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Hmm...it still feels a bit off, if you know what I mean. It might be better to do it more like J.R.R. Tolkien's The Silmarillion and word more like an epic poem than The Bible. I wish you though either way! Good luck to ya.
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DisneyMaster Featured By Owner Jul 15, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thanks.
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Bronyman1995 Featured By Owner Jul 18, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Well, if I may suggest, Discord should not have been created by the parents of Celestia and Luna. He should be the spirit of chaos. If anything, he should come about by accident. Maybe he should come from Tartartus or something...
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BlackberryFinn Featured By Owner Jun 9, 2012
Not really written like the bible, it's written more like a myth.
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DisneyMaster Featured By Owner Jun 9, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
It will get more bible-esque in Chapter 2.
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EmperorNortonII Featured By Owner May 20, 2012  Professional Traditional Artist
Looks interesting so far!
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DisneyMaster Featured By Owner May 20, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Glad you liked it.
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DisneyMaster Featured By Owner May 16, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Glad you liked it.
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BraveryTheHusky Featured By Owner May 14, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Well you've perked my intrest. I'm interested to see how this plays out.
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DisneyMaster Featured By Owner May 14, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Me too.
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Thebonninator Featured By Owner May 14, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
This is so neat I am intrigued to read more.
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DisneyMaster Featured By Owner May 14, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I'll see what I can do.
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Boss-Hoss1 Featured By Owner May 13, 2012
interesting take on pony history. :)
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DisneyMaster Featured By Owner May 13, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thanks.
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BB-K Featured By Owner May 13, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Wow, that is going to be quite a huge project when you start from Genesis all the way to Revelations. :o
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DisneyMaster Featured By Owner May 13, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Don't worry, I'm just going from this to when Nightmare Moon gets trapped.
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BB-K Featured By Owner May 13, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Yeap, and that's where Twilight has a copy of that bible when she grew towards her teen years.
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DisneyMaster Featured By Owner May 14, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Not exactly the idea I was going for, but I'll see what I can do.
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